Sharks Swimming

My Swimming Reflection

We have been doing swimming for 5 weeks so far this is the video of my swimming, 

we were doing free style I am proud because it looks amazing. I have never seen myself swim. This is what i look like when I swim I see my mouth slightly out of the water, I also see nice long arms that are stretched out I like doing swimming in school I cant wait to do it next year.

Narrative writing

My Reflection: I was learning to write a fairy tale. First i  had to watch a video called: sleeping beauty.  i thought it was just like the other one because the link was in lesson 2. My Next step is to write my own narrative.

Term 4 Week 5

Wining The house!!!
Paragraph 1: On Friday when i got home from 4 square dad came home and went in the kitchen and my nana asked if he went to the auction for gosford drive, he tricked us he said " oh no!! i forgot to go to the auction" then my mum came in and said " we forgot to go because we won the house"

Paragraph 2: We started to jumping up and down, my nana could not get up because of here hip?? we were so happy we won the house.

Paragraph 3: We only got it for 830 dollars, we super super happy we won it because there is a forest and a park by our new house. We were finding a house because Lachlan did not get in pukaranga college.
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Fractured fairy tale

 My Reflection: I was learning to write a narrative. First I had to watch a video, read some examples and think about fairy tales I know. Next I had to complete a writing frame to generate my ideas. I thought it was interesting because it made me think really deeply about what makes a story interesting and how to hook a reader in. I liked the framework as it let me put my thoughts in a clear order and helped me know what to put into my narrative as a whole. After I had generated my ideas I had to create the introduction to the narrative. I chose to share my learning by completing the logical order activity.  I thought it was easy after I read the information about the structure of a narrative. My next step is to use what I have learnt to write my own narrative.  

Narrative Famework

My Reflection

I was learning to write a narrative. First I had to watch a video, read some examples and think about fairy tales I know. With my group I had to order the Little Red Riding Hood fairy tale, label it and then take I photo. Next I had to use this to complete a writing frame. I thought it was interesting because it made me think really deeply about what makes a story interesting and how to hook a reader in. I liked the framework as it let me put my thoughts in a clear order and helped me know what to put into my narrative as a whole. I chose to share my learning by completing the logical order activity.  I thought it was easy after I read the information about the structure of a narrative. My next step is to use what I have learnt to write my own narrative.

Term 4 Week 4

Getting Player Of The Day!!:
Paragraph 1: Yesterday after school i went netball. When i got to my team and me started running to the fence and to the other fence at the end and run back again, After that we played this game (when someone is in the middle, they throw to the person and then the person throws back and the person in the middle. The person in the middle has to throw it to the other person and keep on doing that.

Paragraph 2: After the game my team started playing a little game of netball to practice, First i was center then i think i was ether attack or defence then we went to find our court, then we got in our positions i was center 1st, i think in the fist half we got 5 points and i think they got 1 point. then i was off the 2nd half. In the 3rd half i hurt my leg so i went to tell my coach and then she said to my mum's friend charlotte hurt here leg, so then i went off.

Paragraph 3: On the 4th half i went back on because my leg is better, i was attack this half we got 10 or 6 goals? We won and the other team lost. We got 1 lollipops at the end of the game, some of the players got 2 like i did. We were doing player of the day today and 2 people got player of the day 1 was Conny 2 was Charlotte witch was me.

Paragraph 4: I was really excited when i got player of the day i didn't get a trophy but i got free Pita Pete. It was fun and awesome doing netball.
The End!!         

Determining Cedibility

My Reflection:

I have been learning to do a task called Determining Credibility.  So what you have to do for this task is you have 2 pieces of writing and you have 2 different questions for each piece of writing and you can only answer by highlighting the words YES or NO.  I enjoyed doing this activity because I have never done this before.