Learning to skip count in 10's and 20's

My Reflection: I am learning to skip count in 10's and 20's. I found this activity easy because Mrs Melville helped me. My next step with skip counting is to do it myself with nobody helping me.

Learning to combine numbers to make ten

My Reflection: I was learning to make tidy tens. I found this activity easy because i worked the problems out and i solved the questions. My next step with combining numbers is to make tidy tens in 100s

Narritve writing

Term 4 Week 6

The Athletics day
Paragraph 1: On Wednesday i went to lloyds elsmore for the Athletics day, We got the whole day of school witch was awesome.

Paragraph 2: When we got there i was a bit scared because i thought i was going to lose but when Mrs adamsin told us don't be all sad if you come last because you presenting EPS.


Paragraph 3: first the 400 meters went and Ellie was in it. finally the 60 meters was on and that was me and Chloe. I think i was in the first row for it? Then the gun went and we ran off, Then i was at the end and i came 4th. Then Chloe went and she came either 4th or 6th.

Paragraph 4: Then the 100 meters was on, Me and Chloe were in it and we got confused because we did not know where to go, then we asked Jessica and she said over there so we went over there and got ready. I was the 3rd row and i was in Chloe's lane, Boom the gun went and the 1st schools went and the person in my lane came 1st. Then the 2nd gun went Chloe and other schools ran to the end, Chloe came last. Then the 3rd gun went and i was doing it with other school and i came 2ND, when the man came up to me i was just like what is he doing in my head, he gave me a 2nd place laminated thing then i gave it to a lady. I was in the final. We walked over there and we were first to go but we got a false start so we got a rest. Then we were last and i came 2nd to last.

Paragraph 5: Then we went in the bus and went back to school and we got changed. Then we were wondering were the class was and we checked in the auditorium and they were there so we went in to join them. Then we got our backs and went home. THE END!!!

Narrative Writing

 My Reflection
I am learning to write a fractured fairy tale. I had to write a fairy tale made up. My Partner was Emma N, We had to write a fairy tale, My next is to write my own fractured fairy tale.

Term 4 Week 6

My Charlotte Shopping Day 
Paragraph 1: On Sunday we went out for our Charlotte shopping day, we went to 3 places the 1st was rebel sports the 2nd was Hannah's the 3rd was Pakn'save, we went there because my sports shoes were to small and my school shoes break all the time and mum's netball popped.

Paragraph 2: At rebel sports we were looking for quite along time for sports shoes. We were looking for sports shoes because my other sport shoes did not fight at all and they were really small. Lachlan lily and my dad and mum were helping me until i found these really cool shoes. The really cool shoes i found were asics and they were purple and blue and purple lases also zig zags and white and black at the bottom of the shoe.

Paragraph 3: After looking for sports shoes we went looking for a for a netball because our pink ball popped so i was looking for one and i could chose because i asked my mum if i could and so i saw a silver fern ball and my mum said when i picked it up she said do you think the patterns on it are a bit to ugly i was just like NO and so we got it.

Paragraph 4: Then we went to the counter and i put them on and it was $120 i was just like that's expensive and i looked at my mum and she looked at me and said "look after them" and i said "i will try to" and then she laughed.


Paragraph 5: After shopping at rebel sports we all went to Hanna's we were looking for sandels because my 4 or 3 other sandels broke so then mum found these ones and said "why not have these ones" "okay" i said. So we went to the counter and bought the shoes.

Paragraph 6: Then we went to pakn'save and got grossires. We got strawberries a little present for someone witch is the 4th person in the family and fruit, vegtebals and other stuff. Then after shopping we went to the counter and bought it i think it was $241.\

Paragraph 7: these what the sports shoes look like:

   These what my school shoes look like:

Sharks Swimming

My Swimming Reflection

We have been doing swimming for 5 weeks so far this is the video of my swimming, 

we were doing free style I am proud because it looks amazing. I have never seen myself swim. This is what i look like when I swim I see my mouth slightly out of the water, I also see nice long arms that are stretched out I like doing swimming in school I cant wait to do it next year.

Narrative writing

My Reflection: I was learning to write a fairy tale. First i  had to watch a video called: sleeping beauty.  i thought it was just like the other one because the link was in lesson 2. My Next step is to write my own narrative.

Term 4 Week 5

Wining The house!!!
Paragraph 1: On Friday when i got home from 4 square dad came home and went in the kitchen and my nana asked if he went to the auction for gosford drive, he tricked us he said " oh no!! i forgot to go to the auction" then my mum came in and said " we forgot to go because we won the house"

Paragraph 2: We started to jumping up and down, my nana could not get up because of here hip?? we were so happy we won the house.

Paragraph 3: We only got it for 830 dollars, we super super happy we won it because there is a forest and a park by our new house. We were finding a house because Lachlan did not get in pukaranga college.
THE END    

Fractured fairy tale

 My Reflection: I was learning to write a narrative. First I had to watch a video, read some examples and think about fairy tales I know. Next I had to complete a writing frame to generate my ideas. I thought it was interesting because it made me think really deeply about what makes a story interesting and how to hook a reader in. I liked the framework as it let me put my thoughts in a clear order and helped me know what to put into my narrative as a whole. After I had generated my ideas I had to create the introduction to the narrative. I chose to share my learning by completing the logical order activity.  I thought it was easy after I read the information about the structure of a narrative. My next step is to use what I have learnt to write my own narrative.  

Narrative Famework

My Reflection

I was learning to write a narrative. First I had to watch a video, read some examples and think about fairy tales I know. With my group I had to order the Little Red Riding Hood fairy tale, label it and then take I photo. Next I had to use this to complete a writing frame. I thought it was interesting because it made me think really deeply about what makes a story interesting and how to hook a reader in. I liked the framework as it let me put my thoughts in a clear order and helped me know what to put into my narrative as a whole. I chose to share my learning by completing the logical order activity.  I thought it was easy after I read the information about the structure of a narrative. My next step is to use what I have learnt to write my own narrative.

Term 4 Week 4

Getting Player Of The Day!!:
Paragraph 1: Yesterday after school i went netball. When i got to my team and me started running to the fence and to the other fence at the end and run back again, After that we played this game (when someone is in the middle, they throw to the person and then the person throws back and the person in the middle. The person in the middle has to throw it to the other person and keep on doing that.

Paragraph 2: After the game my team started playing a little game of netball to practice, First i was center then i think i was ether attack or defence then we went to find our court, then we got in our positions i was center 1st, i think in the fist half we got 5 points and i think they got 1 point. then i was off the 2nd half. In the 3rd half i hurt my leg so i went to tell my coach and then she said to my mum's friend charlotte hurt here leg, so then i went off.

Paragraph 3: On the 4th half i went back on because my leg is better, i was attack this half we got 10 or 6 goals? We won and the other team lost. We got 1 lollipops at the end of the game, some of the players got 2 like i did. We were doing player of the day today and 2 people got player of the day 1 was Conny 2 was Charlotte witch was me.

Paragraph 4: I was really excited when i got player of the day i didn't get a trophy but i got free Pita Pete. It was fun and awesome doing netball.
The End!!         

Determining Cedibility

My Reflection:

I have been learning to do a task called Determining Credibility.  So what you have to do for this task is you have 2 pieces of writing and you have 2 different questions for each piece of writing and you can only answer by highlighting the words YES or NO.  I enjoyed doing this activity because I have never done this before.